I like the top two here but for the original, I like the blue from the other one. The blue reminds me of dairy products so I think its a better solver for the original. I feel like the logo and "creamer" may be getting a bit too large because the lighter ovals are different folds right? Kind of hard to explain but it seems like the logo and type is very close to the fold edges. Hope that makes sense.
I also like this first set. The colors of the structure appear to be working much better together than your other set. I'm definitely liking the illustrations of the flavors as well. The drawing for the hazelnut is looking like it's getting a bit lost in the color of the background though. You can try a darker shade for the nuts, or maybe a stroke. Jenny brings up a good point because the front face of your package structure is pretty narrow so the type looks like it's too confined within that frame. It could be as simple as taking the size of the typefaces down a few notches.
This set works better as a whole than the other set. All of the colors share a common richness to them which feels absent in the second set because of the blue.
looking good...i really like the shape of the package..i think your icons still need some work. ever thought of using real pictures? Definitely the pour needs work--it should at least be splashing at the bottom of the pour. Also, i'm not sold on your colors yet. original and vanilla are too similar in color.
yeah she's right the color of the two from the top is great but the last has the color combination has already establish as the first color but darken you should used the blue for the original. the the type rely is like on the edge so what happen to the last comp that is just perfect in the midle but over great design
Really nice elegant design. I think this set works a lot better together than the other set because of the different shades of brown. The white text also pops out which is really nice. I really get the coffee feel when I look at the design. Great work.
I prefer this set. The images goes much better together than previously. I think I would like to se a variation with totally different color backgrounds just to get a different idea. I'm sure you have already experimented, but the colors of both sets are very similar. The type looks good. -Helen
if the first and third were placed next to each other they would get confused. the colors need to be different. i like the new logo for the original. this one will turn out nice.
I like the top two here but for the original, I like the blue from the other one. The blue reminds me of dairy products so I think its a better solver for the original. I feel like the logo and "creamer" may be getting a bit too large because the lighter ovals are different folds right? Kind of hard to explain but it seems like the logo and type is very close to the fold edges. Hope that makes sense.
ReplyDeleteI like it a lot better. The color makes the type pop out more. The white text compliments the darker color.
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ReplyDeleteI also like this first set. The colors of the structure appear to be working much better together than your other set. I'm definitely liking the illustrations of the flavors as well. The drawing for the hazelnut is looking like it's getting a bit lost in the color of the background though. You can try a darker shade for the nuts, or maybe a stroke. Jenny brings up a good point because the front face of your package structure is pretty narrow so the type looks like it's too confined within that frame. It could be as simple as taking the size of the typefaces down a few notches.
ReplyDeleteThis set works better as a whole than the other set. All of the colors share a common richness to them which feels absent in the second set because of the blue.
ReplyDeletelooking good...i really like the shape of the package..i think your icons still need some work. ever thought of using real pictures? Definitely the pour needs work--it should at least be splashing at the bottom of the pour. Also, i'm not sold on your colors yet. original and vanilla are too similar in color.
ReplyDeleteyeah she's right the color of the two from the top is great but the last has the color combination has already establish as the first color but darken you should used the blue for the original. the the type rely is like on the edge so what happen to the last comp that is just perfect in the midle but over great design
ReplyDeleteReally nice elegant design. I think this set works a lot better together than the other set because of the different shades of brown. The white text also pops out which is really nice. I really get the coffee feel when I look at the design. Great work.
ReplyDeleteI prefer this set. The images goes much better together than previously. I think I would like to se a variation with totally different color backgrounds just to get a different idea. I'm sure you have already experimented, but the colors of both sets are very similar. The type looks good.
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I like what you have going on so far. I think it is coming along quite nicely. =)
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if the first and third were placed next to each other they would get confused. the colors need to be different.
ReplyDeletei like the new logo for the original. this one will turn out nice.
prefer more muted colors.
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